Sunday, June 8, 2008

I FEEL

This is a poem I read in a book. But I added some more lines. Here it is.
I FEEL
I feel normal when i am alone
When my father hugs me I freeze.
BUT! When my mother hugs me I melt!!

3 comments:

The Minking Than said...

That is sweet :)

Anonymous said...

Now you must be wondering who this 'Mr X' is, isn't it? Well, you wont get to know, that's why I'm Mr X!

This poem was really sweet. But don't always say that about your dad!! Even he loves you as much as your mom does!

Mr X

Anonymous said...

write what you feel baby.Writing is not only about playing with words. Why I am saying is that I am sure you dont freeze when your father hugs you.