I wrote a letter to God
But I didn’t know his address
I asked the lightning and he said
He lives in the light
The air said
He lives in the oxygen
The Cheetah said
He lives in the speed
The tree said
He lives on the leaves
And
The road said
He lives at the end
But
I gave the letter to mom
Because He lives in her heart
- By Neeru
4 comments:
Hello Neeru! Came here from your brother's blog. And came here especially after reading the poem! Dear boy, dont have any doubt about this, you are going to grow to a great poet, and one of the best in that. Loved it kiddo! Lovely thought and it comes out best from a small child :-)
Keep writing. :-)
My Dear Niranjan,
very Good Morning. Nice to see your poem on your dearest mother.
You write extreamly well and please continue to pen down your expressions.
In Kerala, it is raining now. At 5.30 AM I went for a swim in the nearby pool. It was really nice to swim lonely while it was raining heavily. Now I am listening to some good music of Ariyakkudi Ramanauja Iyengar( Carnatic Music) and writing to Neeru. What else I need to start a good day. I wish you too a nice day of happiness.
Ache
Neeru,
You're quite famous.
Be proud of that.
I came here from Cris's blog.
I loved your writing, dear brother.
Keep writing, Go Ahead and congrats to you on being to pursue what you're passionate about rather than settle for something uninteresting.
ohhhhhhhh touching poem ma dear......gud work keep it up, keep writing, god bless u....
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