Saturday, July 9, 2011

A Review I made when i was 6-7 years old!!!

  I found this review somewhere hidden in my computer. I didn't even know i had done such a thing. There were some grammatical errors when i read it, but i wanted to keep it the kiddish way.                     


The Snow-White Pigeon

By Enid Blyton

     This is a story about a caring girl who looks after a pretty pigeon hardly as she didn’t have much money. This shows her love to animals.
There was a little girl named Isabel. She liked animals and birds very much but she did not have one. She used to feed the creatures in the jungle left over food. One day, she saw a white pigeon joining the feast. Isabel told her mother that she wanted the white pigeon. Her mother said no but when a cat hurt the bird, she allowed Isabel to keep the bird till it gets OK. They kept the bird inside a rabbit hutch. After sometime, she had nothing left to feed the bird. Then Isabel went to Mrs. Straw’s barn and said, “I want some corns”. She gave Isabel some corn when the girl washed and cleaned some eggs for her. When she went to the barn again on another day; she had to give milk to the baby lambs. This time the woman gave her four apples for her work. But Isabel asked for another handful of corn instead of apples. When she got to the hatch to feed the pigeon, the bird showed her an egg. She took the egg laid by the pigeon and showed it to her mother. But her mother told Isabel that the pigeon was of Miss. Kennedy. Isabel told Miss. Kennedy that her pigeon had laid an egg. The woman told Isabel to keep the baby and to give the mother to her. So, Isabel obeyed and when the egg hatched, she named the little pigeon ‘Snow White’.
      March 22, 2006

 
      
Marking -   * * * * (4 star)